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Post Tue Oct 02, 2007 6:24 pm

I'll Take Care of You

This is for all who helped. You know who you are.

I don't own these people, obviously.

It's my own world, so I do somethings differently. You will eventually see Fraiser, Colonel Mitchell, and General O'Neill all there at the same time.

Enjoy!

-JC

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The year was 1996. Twenty-six year old Captain Lily Gwenivere Aldarin, USAF, sat in the back seat of a Civic on her way to her new assignment. The only thing that she knew about her job was that it was based out of Cheyenne Mountain, Colorado Springs, Colorado, and that it was ultra-classified. According to the limited amount of knowledge in the file handed to her upon entering the vehicle, her public job involves ‘deep space telemetry’. Unfortunately anyone who knew Aldarin was aware that she was no scientist. Despite this minor detail, she was excited about her new post, and it was only by recalling her training and professionalism that she could contain her nerves. As the car pulled up to the first security checkpoint, she watched the lieutenant on duty and her driver. She couldn’t really make out what was being said, but she was allowed onto the base after showing her military ID to the lieutenant and he verified it against his clipboard. At the guard’s nod, the driver moved on and they entered the base complex. They parked in the garage and she was escorted to another checkpoint where she was given a visitor's ID, and then to a series of elevators that seemed to go down forever. Once they reached the bottom, her escort and driver, whose name was Lieutenant Smiers, grinned.

"Welcome to Cheyenne Mountain Complex, ma'am. This used to be a missile silo, but now it's been redone for our present line of work."

"And that is..?" She inquired, speaking almost for the first time. Her voice was a soft contralto, with a curious meter that spoke of an almost forgotten accent.

The lieutenant shrugged. "I'm sorry ma’am; it's not for me to say. If you’ll follow me, General Hammond will give you the full briefing."

She nodded in understanding and followed him through a twisting maze of corridors. As if sensing her insipient confusion, the lieutenant said over his shoulder, “I know it seems confusing right now, ma'am, but as soon as you've been here for a little while it’ll make sense."

As they continued along, he pointed out the designation markings, describing what lay down the corridors as best he could at the moment. At last they arrived in front of a door marked 'General Hammond'. Smiers knocked smartly on the door and announced loudly, "Captain Aldarin, sir, as ordered."

Through the door could be heard a voice with a faint Texas accent saying, "Show her in, son." Smiers opened the door for her and said with a grin, “If I may be the first to say, ma'am, welcome aboard." She smiled back and nodded to him. Self-consciously she smoothed out her uniform as she stepped into the room. Behind the desk stood a large bald man who watched her with a critical eye. Under his scrutiny she straightened her back and gave a smart salute that would have made her superiors proud.

"Captain Lily Aldarin reporting as ordered, sir!"

He returned the salute and then dropped it, watching her for a moment more. Then he smiled warmly at her and beckoned for her to sit down in the one chair opposite his desk. "Welcome, Captain. My name is General George Hammond. Now, let's get down to business, shall we?"

“Getting down to business
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I'll Take Care of You, Chapter 2

The first three years of life at Cheyenne Mountain were unlike anything Lily could have imagined in her wildest dreams. Here she was, part of an undercover military organization that saved the planet on an almost regular basis, and the other 99.7% of the world’s population didn’t even have a clue. And she was only a member of SG-2. The real heroes were the members of SG-1, the flag team for the SGC. And yet they too weren’t without sacrifice. It was common knowledge around the base that Dr. Jackson’s wife, Sha’ri, had been taken host to a Goa’uld. To add insult to injury, the latest reports said she had become pregnant with Apophis’ child. Now everyone on base seemed to be avoiding the poor man.

Lily sighed. As much as she wanted to help, she didn’t know him, nor he her. That was her weakness- helping people. She was always the one others turned to for help. After her mother died, she helped raise her sister while her father worked. All throughout school and the Academy she had been popular, though never had she failed to be kind to the others. Not in jest did her instructors and teachers sometimes accuse her of a hero complex.

With a yawn and a stretch she flopped onto her back with her hands under her head as she lay on her bed in her room, staring at the ceiling. The past week had been rough; SG-2 was working on forming an alliance with a very reclusive group of people whose planet happened to have a large amount of Naquada. However, they didn’t want any of the Tauri technology, and were loath to simply give the Naquada away as well. Yet another race that held the precious metal as a holy symbol. Finally, with a groan, she rolled out of bed. She looked around her room and smiled. Word had gotten around that base that she was an artist, and so her room was full of sketches of the personnel. Many were waiting for said personnel to return from off world, so that she could give the portraits to her models. One of her drawings was covered by a black cloth. Striding over to that easel, she pulled aside the cloth. The woman on the canvas was a lieutenant, Susan Saikire, who had been killed in the line of duty. Susan had been a friend of Lily’s, and it grieved her to see her smiling face now. Lily took up her charcoal and wrote the dates of Susan’s life just beneath her signature. The drawing itself would be unveiled at the memorial service, and would be sent to the family, along with General Hammond’s letter. Slowly she recovered the canvas. Knowing her friendship with Saikire, the rest of her team had given her a wide berth. Though appreciative of their thoughtfulness, she was ready for some human company.

When she finally got down to the commissary, she saw the rest of her team and waved, grinning. Malinowski graciously pulled out a chair for her. “So, Captain, how’re you doing?
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Post Wed Nov 21, 2007 12:40 pm

Re: I'll Take Care of You, Chapter 2

OK, so it took my lazy arse awhile to read these two chapters and respond. All I can say is well done and when will the 3rd chapter be posted? I liked the character development and details that you've put into the story so far. Give all the characters a little more depth, which is really a nice touch.
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Post Sat Dec 01, 2007 6:24 pm

Re: I'll Take Care of You, Chapter 1

Any chance that we'll see the story continue?
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Post Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:51 pm

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Yeah, I have the 3rd chapter, I just need to edit it. Beyond that, nothing is written. However, I have finals coming up, but beyond that I have winter break.
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Who are the brave?
Those whose speech is free?
Who are the brave?
Those loving liberty?
All those with heart and mind,
protecting all they find.
Who are the brave?
Those who serve mankind.
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Post Sun Feb 03, 2008 11:44 am

Re: I'll Take Care of You

So when is the next chapter going to be posted?
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Post Tue Feb 05, 2008 12:08 am

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Erm, soon, I promise.

I've had comp troubles, and I lost my documents folder including my pictures and music. So... I'll have the next chappie soon, maybe this weekend. :D.

I hope. However homework doesn't like fanfics.
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Who are the brave?
Those whose speech is free?
Who are the brave?
Those loving liberty?
All those with heart and mind,
protecting all they find.
Who are the brave?
Those who serve mankind.
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Post Tue Sep 08, 2009 1:10 pm

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Hmm, did this get lost in transit? Any news on the progress of your story? I for one am looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
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Post Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:19 pm

Re: I'll Take Care of You

I didn't really know if this board was still active or if their was interest for my fic.
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Who are the brave?
Those whose speech is free?
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Those loving liberty?
All those with heart and mind,
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Post Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:54 pm

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Hello there, yes there is still interest in your fanfic. You are correct in that this group has been rather slow over the past several months. With the end of summer upon us and a new SG starting, hopefully things will pick back up soon. So yes, we are still alive and kicking although its been quiet in the halls and briefing rooms of SG-Operations.
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Post Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:32 pm

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Quiet? After all the racket I made looking for something other than Fruit Loops??
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Post Sat May 19, 2012 11:17 pm

Re: I'll Take Care of You

Just read it...waiting for more :!:
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